A Rite of Passage in Barely a Minute
- SabineR
- Apr 26, 2020
- 1 min read

The woman, dressed only in a silk nightgown
Creeps out of the house
Eyes thick lidded in a barbiturate glaze
She unlatches the gate
The squeaky latch draws the attention of the young girl
Climbing up on the bed in the spare room
She peers out the window
Silently watching the woman get into the car
A 1961 Ford Thunderbird
Crookedly the car backs down the driveway
Turns, facing away from the house
Stops for a minute
Then lurches forward heading down the street like a rocket
Standing alone on the bed in the dark
The child feels the burden
A decision must be made
The choice is hers
There are no guides
No manual
The verdict is up to her
She is both judge and jury
What shall it be?
Life or death?
She feels a surge of power
Understanding at that moment
Right then
She can make something significant happen
Is this the final chapter?
Or just another installment?
Either way, it will be her secret
Traveling through a rite of passage in barely a minute
She mulls it over a little bit more
Then, slowly, she climbs down from the bed
Padding across the house to the master bedroom
She wakes up her father
Alternate ending in another dimension
Traveling through a rite of passage in barely a minute
She mulls it over a little bit more
Then, slowly, she climbs down from the bed
Padding back to her bedroom
She crawls back into bed where she falls asleep




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